I dish out the critiques of others’ work pretty liberally on this here blog. But I’m ready to take it like a man, too. The Gulf Restoration Network is running a video contest, and I have prepared this little piece to submit. What do you think? How can I make it better?
The deadline for submissions is August 10, 2007. If you want to put something together yourself.
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I would develop your sound track more. Use a narrator to back your text lines alonog with a bed of several tracks of nats underneath.
I like it a lot! Good music, good images. I like the concepts of “hero” and “superpower.” “Superpower” sure beats “ecological function.” One thing that confused me a little — the words “These heroes want to save us” seemed to come on the screen a little bit early, while the picture of the flood victims was still on.